Disclaimer

I am not an actual critic. I have not been trained in the art of saying something is bad without making someone feel bad. I am going to attempt to be diplomatic and say my point of view as it is without unnecessary insults or praise, but it really just depends on my day.

Wednesday, August 3, 2011

A Really old thought dump of mine I found

 I wrote this about a year ago, before I had 50,000 words built up in some other story that I myself am writing. Feel free to grimace and mock me for my spelling, grammar, and maybe even ideas. But I hope that those at least are semi sound.


After finishing the Grapes of Wrath i am left with a feeling of John steinbeck just kinda being done with the book.
The whole book is masterfully laid out, with the characters all believably developed, and yet, he ends it with a weird scene of Rosasharn letting an old fifty year old man drink the milk of her dead baby, in a barn, in the hay. Nothing is really resolved. Tom has to run away, Al stays with the Weinwraths to marry Aggie, Casy is killed, and Connie has already run off. The family is falling apart, something that Ma has been dead set against the whole book. The other characters may have developed into tougher people bet they all have the same problems. Uncle John is still worried about sinning, he still feels that even his thoughts are too sinful for him to remain in the company of other humans. Pa is still worried about getting a job, he still worries that the control of the family is now Ma's. Ruthie and Winfield are still just kids, confused about what is going on but still able to be cordial to each other, for the most part. Ruthie gets meaner as she becomes more and more aware of the families problems, but she still is too young to have serious worries, that she can express. Tom, though he is now on the run to for killing a man, still worries about what is right. He thinks he is pretty close, he wants to start a union, and try to help people, but he still is mre of an impulisive character. His emotions lead his actions and when he tries to restrain himself it is very hard for him. Al is still into girls, though he does find Aggie, she is still his main focus, Aggie and the truck are his chief concern.
The only character with new worries is Rosasharn. Her husband has run off, something she has now come to terms with, her baby was born, it was dead, but it is no longer weighing her down. She is the one who is basically going to become a new character have a new role if the book continued, and she is the one that ends the book, the one who does the weird, uncomfortable, akward thing of letting a much older man suck the milk out of her breast. After thinking it over, i think that Steinbeck is actually saying that Rosasharn is now much more important, is a better person, has more will to survive and make other people survive than anyone else in the book. And as the Joad's story continues, undocumented she will play a large part in keeping the family alive. Ma and her will become almost equals. They will both have gone through personal hardships that have made them stronger. Ma's is seeing her family breaking up, falling apart, and Rosasharn's is having her husband run off, and giving birth to a dead baby. Plus they share the hardships of being Okies on the road in the middle of the Great Depression.

So ya, thats what i think of the Grapes of Wrath. Sorry if a lot of the capitol letters aren't capitol, my shift keys are kinda flipping out. Don't feel like cooperating anymore. Now I actually have to go do homework, but if anybody does read this, then i hope you think i am really smart and insightful after reading that Joad bit. I just want you to know that, i made that all up and you probably shouldn't quote me.....I am only a sophmore in highschool afterall. And you may have noticed that I don't really know how to make sentances, I am just faking it.

1984, George Orwell

 (Spoiler, don't read if you haven't read the book.)

I read this book a while ago but it is the book that gave me this whole idea so I might as well start with it. I apologize if I get plot points wrong, or mess up on a character's name. I actually don't really remember how the book begins, but I will do my best.
When the book first begins, I remember now, Winston Smith, the protagonist, is just coming home from a day of work. He mentions things that will be prevalent throughout the whole book. Orwell writes Winston's thoughts in a matter of fact way. It isn't necessarily bad that the elevator is broken, there is an image of Big Brother on the wall that seems to be always watching you, or that you actually are always watched by the telescreen, it is just how it is. Winston stands with his back to the telecsreen so that he is allowed to think. I  could consider this a symbolic hint at what the rest of the book is going to be like. Winston, until he is captured, often turns his back to authority and then seems to work twice as hard to appear to be a diehard Big Brother supporter.
I think that Orwell must have been a very suspicious guy in real life because he has the rebels lead by Big Brother and the Party. He must have, somewhere in his heart, never completely trusted anybody. The message that is clear throughout the book is everyone is breakable, no one is a good person, and the people you think you can trust are actually working against you.
Two of the people that Winston comes to trust implicitly end up betraying him. One is the owner of the little shop where Winston buys the paperweight, the journal, and eventually uses as a place to see his lover, Julia. The owner though he is dressed as a prole, is actually a member of the Thought Police. The other is O'Brien. O'Brien is a member of the inner party who convinces Winston and then though Winston, Julia, that he is a member of the rebels, seeking to overthrow Big Brother and the whole party system. He even goes as far as to write a book of all the flaws and ways the current party works. Once Winston and Julia are completely immersed in illegal activity O'Brien has the Thought Police arrest them. The rest of the book is difficult to read because it is all about torture, physical and mental.
The torture is so acute that eventually Winston is convinced that two plus two is five. To add to that O'Brien does the torturing and Winston thinks of O'Brien as a friend no matter how many unspeakable things O'Brien does to him.
This strange trust that Winston has in O'Brien makes the reader wonder whether O'Brien is even a supporter of Big Brother at all. O'Brien is head of the Thought Police so he would never be caught, it is a possibility to mull over. I have for quite sometime, I don't run out of things to think about or re-think about in the matter because there is no conclusive evidence in the text for either side.
When Winston is finally released he is just a shell. His mind has been worn down from the stress to think whatever it is that he is told to think. The only thing that lets the reader know that he is still a tiny bit Winston is that he will remind himself that two plus two is five, and when he finally realizes he loves Big Brother, he is happy because he gets to die.
The book starts out dark but matter of fact. It isn't till the end of the book when the reader has had the depressing thought provoking situation bored into their head that they really realize how bad it has been all along.
In one scene toward the beginning of the book Winston is walking  down the street where a bomb is set to explode. He ducks for cover because that it what the proles are doing and the proles have good intuition. When he gets up and continues on his way there is a body part in the street from a prole that didn't move fast enough. He just kicks it aside with his foot, no biggy. I just kept reading till that processed then went back and read it again. Winston's train of thought didn't even wander as he kicked the hand, or whatever it was, out of the way. So neither does the reader's.
At the end of the book when you close it and look up, pulling yourself out of the world, you are plunged back in with -- Wait a minute, it didn't just get worse at the end, it was that bad from the beginning. How was I able to sit through this whole book?
I think that George Orwell did a very good job with the whole thing. It is a different take on the human condition. It doesn't voice and opinion on whether humans are inherently good or bad, it just shows how he thinks humans would cope if there was nothing good at all. If they never knew anything good, what he thinks would happen. As 1984 is the only book I have read with such a theme I am inclined to believe what Orwell thought, that humans would think as told, do as told, and rethink as told. Their job isn't to support themselves, or have interesting ideas. For them to survive they are to be something that is nothing.